NEEDS MORE GUNG!!
NEEDS MORE GUNG!!
I thought you already gave it quite a good dose of gung, my good sir. <3
It's been a while since I've heard some proper banging techno tunes on Newgrounds, good job!
You really, really, really need to work on your mixing. The kick is completely drowned out the mix. You also have other bassy sounds playing like impacts while the kick is playing. This is really something that should be avoided.
I think the problem is that you simply don't have the right audio equipment to hear what's going on in the low end because to you, it probably sounds fine.
It's very off on low-end mixing. I usually mix low end on a different system. So your comment is spot on! I'll mix it properly in the coming days and I'll post the new one. Let me know if the problem is still there then, because that would indeed indicate that the flaw is within my audiosystem! Thanks for the feedback!
It's all listenable until 01:25 jesus. That is a great example of how not to mix. That synth is way too loud.
The impact at 01:44 is out of place, or you could have used that as the kick.
Keep practicing, this shows you have potential.
Thanks for the review ! :3
Yeah this synth was a bit loud I apologize ! X)
But honestly I think the impact of 1:44 is great, I wouldn't want to brag, but I think I wouldn't remove it ! =3
Thanks again ! =)
As a WIP, it's pretty fine. The sounds all work nicely together, nice build ups and transitions. Good luck with the full version, hope the quality stays up to this level throughout.
I'm really just nitpicking here, but that high hat that goes off every quarter note could maybe be made shorter or quieter.
Thank you, will do :D
Very inspiring piece but, did you cut your highs?
I really like the arrangement except for the outro. Fading out is a bit... bad and does not do this piece justice.
Nah. I even boosted the upper mids. That's why high notes are a bit louder.
I admit that I had no idea how to end this piece, though.
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