Extremely good!
I'm aware it's a thing to scoop the mids in this style but you went a bit overboard with it.
I found this track sounds a lot better when you boost around 900hz by about 5dB.
Extremely good!
I'm aware it's a thing to scoop the mids in this style but you went a bit overboard with it.
I found this track sounds a lot better when you boost around 900hz by about 5dB.
Then please check out a more recent track and see if I have learned! Thinking about it this song is 6 months old or so, just hanging about on my computer.
NEEDS MORE GUNG!!
I thought you already gave it quite a good dose of gung, my good sir. <3
You really, really, really need to work on your mixing. The kick is completely drowned out the mix. You also have other bassy sounds playing like impacts while the kick is playing. This is really something that should be avoided.
I think the problem is that you simply don't have the right audio equipment to hear what's going on in the low end because to you, it probably sounds fine.
It's very off on low-end mixing. I usually mix low end on a different system. So your comment is spot on! I'll mix it properly in the coming days and I'll post the new one. Let me know if the problem is still there then, because that would indeed indicate that the flaw is within my audiosystem! Thanks for the feedback!
It's all listenable until 01:25 jesus. That is a great example of how not to mix. That synth is way too loud.
The impact at 01:44 is out of place, or you could have used that as the kick.
Keep practicing, this shows you have potential.
Thanks for the review ! :3
Yeah this synth was a bit loud I apologize ! X)
But honestly I think the impact of 1:44 is great, I wouldn't want to brag, but I think I wouldn't remove it ! =3
Thanks again ! =)
As a WIP, it's pretty fine. The sounds all work nicely together, nice build ups and transitions. Good luck with the full version, hope the quality stays up to this level throughout.
I'm really just nitpicking here, but that high hat that goes off every quarter note could maybe be made shorter or quieter.
Thank you, will do :D
Very inspiring piece but, did you cut your highs?
I really like the arrangement except for the outro. Fading out is a bit... bad and does not do this piece justice.
Nah. I even boosted the upper mids. That's why high notes are a bit louder.
I admit that I had no idea how to end this piece, though.
The melody isn't too great. Sounds like random notes in a scale put together without much thought. It gets really stale by the 3 minute mark. The mixing, the leads are pretty loud and harsh compared to the drums and the other synths. A bassline could fit in and be nice but as the track is now, good choice of sounds, just badly executed.
Thanks but your missing the point here. Music isn't really anything without imagination. You need to be able to get in the moment and know what you are trying to get at. Having a series of premonitions can go a long way. I've heard some of your songs too and they are mostly good but the bass sometimes override the rhythm and some songs don't sound like it's mixed well. Then again I'm not a fan of heavy tunes like Dubstep because it's mostly noise. We all hear something different I guess.
Mixing is fine, nothing to say on that. The bass, I think the mids could be cut a bit to make it deeper.
Nice chords and melody.
Good drums, gj on that.
Are you going to make a proper intro and outro or leave it like this. I'd give an extra .5 stars if there was a proper intro and outro.
I may leave the intro like that, but the outro has yet to be constructed. Kinda bobbin' between ideas. Definitely could cut the mids. Thanks for the input!
-J.P.
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