Great first attempt. Your mixing is really off. First off the kick is way too quiet, the clap is way too loud.
The release on the synths are turned way too up, try using reverb + compression instead. (Make them quieter too)
The whole kick is pitched instead of just the tail which makes the attack feel inconsistent and weird. Try separating the first hit of the kick and the tail. The tail can be pitched with timestretching so as you pitch it up, it doesn't get shorter.
I'm aware it's a thing to scoop the mids in this style but you went a bit overboard with it.
I found this track sounds a lot better when you boost around 900hz by about 5dB.
Then please check out a more recent track and see if I have learned! Thinking about it this song is 6 months old or so, just hanging about on my computer.
Do you even try?
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